Writing “Do’s” and “Don’ts”

Storyweaving

As part of a Storyweaving Writer’s Workshop, I chose the following quote from a list:

“There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.”
-W. Somerset Maugham

I was then told to write the three rules of writing “dos” that work for me, and the three don’ts (in 15 minutes). So, here goes.

WHAT WORKS

1. I have to have feelings about the subject of my writing. I can’t just fritter the time away creating lovely prose that has no meaning to me. I’ve even found that some of the pieces I’ve written that I’ve spent little time on are the most powerful because of the strong feelings or passion I had for the issue. So, I must have feelings – good or bad – about what I write.
2. Getting pen to paper works for me. Once the ink starts flowing, so, too, do the ideas. The same is true for the keyboard, but I have to admit that some of my favorite writing has been longhand. There are studies that prove this true for some physiological/psychological reasons, but I know it from personal experience. A “do” is to start writing. It’s never failed me.
3. I try (emphasis on try) to not edit and let the words flow and allow the ideas to surface. I’ve been surprised where stories will take me, both fiction and non-fiction. It’s amazing how the mind works and conjures up memories long forgotten when the ink meets paper. Therefore, I find it so important to trust the process and let the words tell the story that may otherwise remain captive inside.

WHAT DOESN’T

1. I don’t like to schedule writing time, but I’ve done it when necessary. I’d really rather let the writing happen when the right juices are flowing. (I know, this is very contrary to what many writers say, but this is about me.) I give much credit to journalists who work under deadline to produce writing for others’ consumption. I’ve done this, too, and it is not my preference.
2. I don’t choose subjects I’m not comfortable with. I still remember meeting a woman who decided to write a book about jockeys, but she knew little of horses, racing, or jockeys. Some people may prefer this, but I think that with a rich life spanning half a century that surely there is enough that I do know about to convey through my writing.
3. Finally, I don’t like writing about dark subjects. It may be all the rage, but I prefer to see light – some light – in everything. I’ll let others focus on darkness while I pursue some positivity in my writing. Good stories do involve conflict, which is not always pretty, but in many cases is it how we deal with the conflict that creates the positive story.

Thank you, Carol Burbank, for a tremendous day of “storyweaving” in the woods and for suggesting I share this list.

Anyone else willing to share some “do’s” and “don’ts?”

Riding Invisible – Book Review

Riding Invisible
It’s been awhile since a book review, and since I found this particular book so interesting, I wanted to share “Riding Invisible” by Sandra Alonzo with you.

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I loved “Riding Invisible” and had a hard time putting it down. The story begins with young Yancy running away from home on his horse, Shy, and the journal of his adventure. Yancy also happens to be an illustrator, and his illustrations help put the reader in the mind of an adolescent boy. While the subject matter is serious – abusive brother, parents trying to cope with the brother’s mental illness, homelessness, and more – the book is not morose or depressing. The author clearly writes from the boy’s point of view, seeing all these issues as he sees them.

I would say “Riding Invisible” is appropriate for ages 13 and up due to some of the language and situations. But as an adult, I truly appreciated the child’s perspective, and it made me think about fairness in families when one child’s behavior creates chaos. Perhaps I cared about Yancy so much becasue the character was so well developed. Spoiler alert: in the end it seemed there was hope.

I highly recommend this book. It is a very different read, and one that will leave readers of all ages thinking beyond the pages.

For the “Riding Invisible book trailer, click here.

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One-Liners

One of my virtual friends, Charlie Bray, began a new series featuring one-liners from novels.

http://theindietribe.wordpress.com/2013/04/09/10-one-liners-from-10-novels-collection-one/

I’m pleased to announce that Charlie chose a one-liner from “Believing In Horses” as one of the top ten in the first collection.

“Ten pairs of eyes in various stages of fear, desperation, and sadness, all watching Sadie, seemingly pleading for her to do something”

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BELIEVING IN HORSES by Valerie Ormond

I don’t know Charlie personally, but via the worldwide web.  He works tirelessly to help independent and aspiring authors through efforts such as this.  He has a huge following…just check out the blogroll.

But I found Charlie’s contest fun for more reasons than the win.  You see, I had to pick the one-liner to enter.  For you writers out there…what line would you choose from your novel, story, or work in progress?  Try it…it won’t be as easy as you think.

A Fun Writing Exercise

Question: What will make me a better writer?

Answer: Write more.Almost any writer will respond to the better writing question with similar advice. Figuring ALL writers couldn’t be wrong, I decided to write more myself and see if it worked. I participated in a fun flash fiction writing contest once sponsored by Emlyn Chand and Novel Publicity with the following rules:

  1. Write a romance story, including all the traditional elements of a romance novel, with the title “Kindergarten Love Blossom.”
  2. Use no more than 1000 words.
  3. The main characters must be…no more than five years old (nothing off-color).

As the blooms are starting to blossom here in Maryland, it seemed a good time to share this exercise.

Fun Writing Exercise

Photo by Jaime Navarro

Kindergarten Love Blossom

Hannah stood on her tiptoes shading the sun from her eyes with her hand trying to see as far as she could see. A typical glorious Montana summer day, a light breeze filled the endless sky, and the sun shone a bright smile from the heavens. Hannah spotted a truck bouncing up the country gravel road across the green hills, bringing what she’d been waiting for since last month – her new best friend. [Read more...]

For You. For Your Horse. From Love.

Today I’d like to bring you a guest post by Nick McFarland from the United Kingdom who explains to us how he became involved in the horse industry. Nick is the owner of HM Equestrian, a retailer: “For You. For Your Horse.” Please join me in welcoming Nick and hearing his story.

In November 2012, I started HM Equestrian, a business built on a family love of horses. But people frequently ask, how did we get here?

Two of Nick McFarland’s horses. McFarland’s love of animals and his family helped drive his business decision.

Well, I first got into all things equestrian through the love of animals and a desire to spend time with my daughter. As a single father, I wanted a common hobby, so we could have a reason to spend time together.With this in mind, and no previous experience of horse ownership, we went out and bought our first horse…who turned out to be pregnant! So after only five months of horse ownership, our first foal was born. Suffice to say this was a very steep learning curve for the entire family. But those first few months of looking after a foal and his mum taught us a huge amount about horses and the way they think. [Read more...]

Making A Difference, One Horse, Or Human, at a Time

Hello readers, I was a finalist in Angelea Walkup’s HorseGirlTV Guest Bloggers competition!  Please see the guest post at http://www.horsegirltv.com/making-a-difference-one-horse-or-human-at-a-time/.  Thanks, Angelea, and Team HorseGirlTV for inviting me to stop by.