A Real Good Story


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I last posted about “Keeping It Real” in writing and mentioned how some people responded to my book, Believing In Horses, turning fiction into reality. Last week, some local children made a significant donation to local rescues in their “Kids Can Do BIG Things, Too!” campaign. Please welcome my guest blogger, Kristy Alvarez, founder of Desire Ministries and the leader of this campaign, who tells the story in her words. 

As many of you know, or may not know, through Desire Ministries, we have been running an after-school Horse Club program since 2006.  We meet with the students of Cornerstone Christian Academy on a weekly basis so that the students who participate can learn the basics of horseback riding and horsemanship at Loftmar Stables in Bowie, Md.

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Critiquing Guidelines via Edie Hemingway

I blogged recently about the value of receiving critiques as a writer. I then fortunately received the following guidelines from co-Regional Advisor of the Maryland-Delaware-West Virginia Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, Edie Hemingway, on giving critiques. Edie graciously agreed to let me share these tips in my blog as a follow-up to my last post.

In Edie’s words, “I put these together when I started teaching my own workshops, based on my experiences ‘workshopping’ during my MFA program at Spalding University. I’ll also be using them for the online course I’m teaching this summer for McDaniel College’s graduate certificate program in Writing for Children and Young Adults.”

Edie Hemingway is the author of Road to Tater Hill
(Delacorte Press and Yearling paperback), winner of a 2009 Parents’ Choice Gold Award, and besides writing, teaches several writing workshops. If you’d like to find out more about her and her programs, she can be reached at
http://www.ediehemingway.com

This is a great list for those who belong to a critique group or plan on joining one. As Edie suggests, these are also useful during the revision process.

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Critiques

Writing critiquesIt’s fascinating how our perspectives can change over time. Last year I attended the regional Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) Spring Conference and saw people receiving critiques from an agent, an editor, and two published authors. I thought, “What kind of people would want to put theirselves through that?” This year, I completed the first ten pages of my current manuscript and anxiously awaited for a chance to compete for one of the thirty available critique slots. I secured one of those sessions, and now completely understand the value critiques play in the writing process.

Admittedly, I’m having much more trouble with my current book, Believing In Horses, Too, than I did with my first book. When I wrote my first book, Believing In Horses, I sat down and wrote. I hadn’t studied books, followed blogs, attended conferences, or listened to webinars all telling me how to write better. I wrote, and revised, edited, and then fortunately had good editors and an excellent publisher. Somehow I thought all I’ve been learning over the past two years would make this next book easier. But it hasn’t. Knowing all that I’m doing wrong has made it that much harder.

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Kings of Colorado – Book Review

Kings of Colorado by David E. Hilton

Not long ago, I received an e-mail that went something like this:

“Dear Valerie,
David E. Hilton’s debut novel KINGS OF COLORADO—now available in paperback (Simon & Schuster; January 3, 2012; $14.00)—is a powerful coming-of-age story set on a juvenile delinquent ranch in the Rockies….I would love to send you a copy of KINGS OF COLORADO to review, giveaway, or feature on Believing in Horses….” 

Since Simon & Schuster cared about my thoughts, I thought I would share them here as well.

In Kings of Colorado (Simon and Schuster, 2011) by David E. Hilton, Will Sheppard stabs, but does not kill, his father, and pays the price for the rest of his life. Sent to the Swope Ranch Boys’ Reformatory in Colorado across the country from his Chicago home, thirteen-year-old Will learns lessons one would hope a child protecting his mother from his abusive father would never have to learn. Two years at the brutal boys’ ranch toughens Will, but does not leave him devoid of emotions. His saving graces include friendships, a special horse he trains, and a kind nurse. Will endures one violent and tragic hardship after another, leaving the reader wondering if he can possibly survive.

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On Book Reviews

On Book Reviews

As an author, why should I review other writers’ work?  Because it makes me a better writer.

About a year ago, I read an article on Writing.com that suggested the same conclusion, so I thought I’d check it out.  After all, reviewing includes reading and analysis, something I’d spent a lifetime doing as an intelligence officer.  So how hard could it be?  Turns out, not so easy.  And how to synthesize several hundred pages into a paragraph, and cram those days of personal reactions into just a few statements?  I’ll offer some suggestions that work for me.

1.   Decide You Are Going To Review the Book Before You Begin Reading

This may sound like a no-brainer, but it’s one I learned along the way.  I’ve actually written reviews on books that I DIDN’T realize I was going to review until after reading, so it’s not impossible.  However, having reviewed both ways, planning ahead works better (for me).

2.   Find a Formula That Works For You

I start with a basic template because I need organization.

*Book introduction and synopsis, with an enticing first sentence.

*Personal observations and reactions.

*A notable portion, quote, passage, character or plot theme that reinforces or explains personal observations and reactions.

*Formatting, design, illustration, or other items impacting the reader.

*Author details, particularly as they relate to subject matter.

*Conclusion and recommendation.

Bill Ansejo’s article “How to Write a Book Review” at Writing-World.com, provides a useful guide covering technical aspects such as including the book title, ISBN, price, etc., and helpful “Points to Ponder,” for example, discussing the credibility of characters.

3.   Read Book Reviews – Lots of Them

See what you like and don’t like, and what may work for you.  Book reviews appear everywhere – newspapers, magazines, online.  I happen to be a Twitter.com fan, and just searching “Book Reviews,” or #bookreviews, yields great results, too.

4.  Decide What Kind of Book Reviewer You Will Be

Kelly Jensen, Stacked blog, wrote an excellent piece, “On Being Critical.”  I particularly liked her delineation between critical and negative, with the following as a key point:

Critical reviews are not negative reviews.
Know this distinction. Critical reviews involve thoughtful analysis and synthesis of the work at hand. They support their statements — both positive and negative — with what’s in front of them.  They check their baggage at the door.

Negative reviews are not supported by text. Negative reviews don’t tell readers anything substantial about the book, but rather, about the reviewer. It’s self reflective, rather than text reflective.”

My personal choice is that if I don’t like a book, I don’t review it.  Since I’m not a book reviewer for a living, I have that freedom.  Enough negativity exists out there, and I just don’t feel the need to contribute more.  This doesn’t make me a dishonest reviewer, and doesn’t mean I rave about every book I read.  But I’ve thought hard about it, and decided that the kind of book reviewer I want to be is one who offers opinions and advice, if applicable.  It’s a bonus if a book’s author appreciates the review and new readers decide to read a book due to my thoughts on it.

5.   Write Well

Remember way back in the first sentence I mentioned that writing reviews makes you a better writer?  Critical thinking, analysis, clarity of thought, proper word choices, captured in a succinct manner deliver the best reviews.  Book review writing provides an excellent writing exercise.  Try it.

Any other tips out there on writing book reviews?  While much is written on HOW authors can get book reviews, it seems less is devoted to how authors can WRITE good reviews.  Please share your thoughts or links to well-written reviews.

Thoughts on Book Awards from a New Recruit

Believing In Horses Wins First Place in Children's Category, Stars and Flags Book Awards

One of my mentors used to tell young Navy recruits the following: “You may think you are new and don’t know much, but as soon as you’ve spent a day in the Navy, you know more than those who have just arrived. You are a mentor, and it’s up to you to share your knowledge with those coming in behind you.”

I decided to apply this to my new writing career. I still consider myself that “young recruit” who doesn’t know much, so am surprised when people ask me advice. But then again, I look at how much I’ve learned in the past few years through reading, courses, conferences, associations, and most importantly, doing. So, I thought I’d share my thoughts on a topic on which I don’t see too much written – book awards.

I’ve seen and heard opinions on book awards varying from “it’s the best thing to gain notice for your book,” to “it’s a waste of time and money.” My opinion: it depends. I remember when first developing my marketing plan I tore through the pages of my Children’s Writer’s and Illustrators Market, wrote down every contest for which my book would be eligible, anticipating entering. As the deadlines neared, I considered the fees, the numbers of books required, and how my book would compete. Then I stopped and asked myself the most important question: “What do I want out of this?”

So far, I’ve yet to enter any of those contests in my original plan, but I will share my personal experiences over the past few months in entering three awards programs.

  1. Question: What did I want?

    Answer: A parent-tested “seal of approval”.

    Discussion: This was important to me. I know many current middle grade and young adult books address very mature themes, but mine does not. I wanted readers and buyers to know that, and felt this type award demonstrated this. Yes, I was thrilled when receiving word that Believing In Horses received the “Best Product” award and the coveted seal of approval. The award provided me what I wanted – an unbiased opinion that my book was suitable for a young audience. I received the actual five sets of evaluations from parent evaluators, providing me excellent feedback, and testimonials –another bonus, for participating in this program.

  2. Book Twirps Summer Reads Contest

    Question: What did I want?

    Answer: A sense for Young Adult book bloggers’ thoughts on the book.

    Discussion: I put together my rather-simple package and submitted my entry, which only included a synopsis — all for free. A few months passed, and I received notification that Book Twirps cancelled the contest because they did not receive enough entries for them to consider it a real contest. Wow, I thought, all these people complaining about not getting people to recognize their work, and here went an opportunity for authors to be recognized – for free. Although the cancellation should have turned out to be a bummer, the contest took an unexpectedly good twist. Book Twirps offered the judges who had been lined up for the contest the opportunity to contact authors if they were interested in reviewing any of the books. I ended up getting a great review by well-known book blogger Jennifer Cheatham, who posted the review to many blogs and sites.

  3. Question: What did I want?

    Answer: The military audience’s perspective.

    Discussion: I found out about the Stars and Flags Book Awards through my membership in the Military Writers Society of America (MWSA) – a great organization, by the way. The criteria for Stars and Flags awards included some type of military connection in the book; my main character deals with the challenges of being part of a military family, such as deployments and moves. With my 25-years’ military experience, I cared what the military audience thought of my book. Fortunately, they liked it, awarding Believing In Horses First Place in the Children’s Category.

    I’m not an expert, but I know more now than I did a few years ago. And I’ve culled and collected thoughts and recent references on book awards and contests from AuthorU, Her Circle, and The Savvy Book Marketer, to share, since like I said, I don’t see a lot written on book awards.

Author U: “Which Book Award Contests Merit Your Attention?”

Her Circle: “Notes from the Slush Pile – Advice on Book Contests and Some Confessions”

The Savvy Book Marketer: “Upcoming Book Awards and Contests.”

     I discussed my personal experiences here because they have not been captured elsewhere. And after all, this is a blog, and I think it should be somewhat personal. You may also notice that the answers to what I wanted DID NOT include the words, “to sell more books.” (Did anyone else just hear my publisher screaming, “Nnnnnoooo!”?)

I hope what you do works for you, and that you think about what you want out of a contest when entering.  Oftentimes, there’s more than one way to win.

Parent Tested Parent Approved Best Product Award