A Real Good Story


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I last posted about “Keeping It Real” in writing and mentioned how some people responded to my book, Believing In Horses, turning fiction into reality. Last week, some local children made a significant donation to local rescues in their “Kids Can Do BIG Things, Too!” campaign. Please welcome my guest blogger, Kristy Alvarez, founder of Desire Ministries and the leader of this campaign, who tells the story in her words. 

As many of you know, or may not know, through Desire Ministries, we have been running an after-school Horse Club program since 2006.  We meet with the students of Cornerstone Christian Academy on a weekly basis so that the students who participate can learn the basics of horseback riding and horsemanship at Loftmar Stables in Bowie, Md.

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Critiquing Guidelines via Edie Hemingway

I blogged recently about the value of receiving critiques as a writer. I then fortunately received the following guidelines from co-Regional Advisor of the Maryland-Delaware-West Virginia Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, Edie Hemingway, on giving critiques. Edie graciously agreed to let me share these tips in my blog as a follow-up to my last post.

In Edie’s words, “I put these together when I started teaching my own workshops, based on my experiences ‘workshopping’ during my MFA program at Spalding University. I’ll also be using them for the online course I’m teaching this summer for McDaniel College’s graduate certificate program in Writing for Children and Young Adults.”

Edie Hemingway is the author of Road to Tater Hill
(Delacorte Press and Yearling paperback), winner of a 2009 Parents’ Choice Gold Award, and besides writing, teaches several writing workshops. If you’d like to find out more about her and her programs, she can be reached at
http://www.ediehemingway.com

This is a great list for those who belong to a critique group or plan on joining one. As Edie suggests, these are also useful during the revision process.

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War Horse Salute

War Horse Movie Screening

Five stars; thumbs up; must see; prepare to cry.  I was fortunate enough see the Washington, D.C., premier of the movie War Horse presented by the Maryland Jockey Club and the American Horse Council on December 15th.  I had wondered if the movie would live up to all the hype; it surpassed expectations.  See it on the big screen; don’t wait for the DVD, because it won’t be the same.

Although I absolutely loved the movie, I have some advice to moviegoers who have read the book:  leave the book at the door.  Some significant differences between the book and the movie exist.  For example, the book is told from the horse’s point of view, and the movie is not.  Some movie characters were more developed than they were in the book, while other well-developed book characters were almost non-existent in the movie.  I kept letting that bother me, when I should have just enjoyed the movie for what it was.  Both the book and the movie are outstanding; they are just different.

When I first heard about the War Horse story, I was immediately drawn to it.  My grandfather served in the trenches in the first World War as an American teenager and regaled us with stories as children that I wish I had listened to more carefully.
He spoke about the gas masks the horses wore to protect them, but never
once complained about his war injuries that left his eyes tearing
until the day he died.  Besides his physical ailment, I believe he suffered from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD), although he certainly never sought treatment for the same.

I’ve always wanted to know more about my grandfather’s wartime experiences, and the book and the movie delivered powerful messages about this era.   In Michael Morpurgo’s own words, the horse’s “story is written so that neither he nor those who knew him, nor the war they lived and died in, will be forgotten.”  I salute Michael Morpungo, the real life characters who told their stories to help him create the book, and the moviemakers for honoring our World War I history in these works of art.

Horse Book Club

Today I met the newly-formed and already-fantastic Horse Book Club at Nantucket Elementary School in Crofton, Md.  Nantucket’s school librarian, Ms. Miller, brought together this group of enthusiastic horse-crazy students to read and discuss my book, Believing In Horses, over the next several months.  Like so many of our educators out there, Ms. Miller, and her assistant Ms. Clark, have gone beyond their required jobs to create a special learning environment for these readers.  Ms. Miller asked if I’d come sign and present the books and talk to the Club on its inaugural day, which of course I happily did.

To make this an ongoing interactive experience, the Club will use a relatively new educational social media platform, Edmodo.  According to its creators, “Edmodo promotes anytime, anyplace learning. Functionally, it allows teachers to post messages, discuss classroom topics, assign and grade classwork, share content and materials, and network and exchange ideas with their peers – but in reality, it is so much more.”  The librarian established a Believing In Horses group in Edmodo allowing us all to discuss and share ideas virtually.  Ms.Miller’s first post:   ”I hope you will enjoy our book club. Our first task is to find a neat name for our book club. Think about ‘horse’ words and share them with the group.”

Educational Social Media Tool

But, our Horse Book Club leaders wanted more.  Besides meeting weekly and discussing the book on Wednesdays (after all raised their right hands and swore they would not read ahead of the assignments), Ms. Miller thought it would be a good idea to have a mid-book project.  So, the Horse Book Club members will be participating in the first annual Voice For The Horse Children’s Writing Competition.  The founder of Voice For The Horse, Yvonne Allen, created the writing competition to provide a unique and free learning opportunity and allow children to share their love for horses across North America through their writing.  From what I saw in the Horse Book Club’s eyes today, watch out competition!

Voiceforthehorse.com

And finally, the club will conclude its year with a field trip to Loftmar Stables, the backdrop and home to many of the horses in the book.  We’ll do some hands on horse work, meet horses, take pictures, and answer final questions.  And now it was my turn to make a club assignment: the Horse Book Club will help me put Ms. Miller on a horse for the first time in her life.  I believe they can do it!

While assessing why I was so estatic about this Horse Book Club visit today, it hit me that this small group represented so many of the goals I had set when writing this book. Kids are reading and writing; they are sharing their love for horses; and adults are learning more about horses – maybe even becoming horse lovers, too.  Thank you, Horse Book Club, for choosing Believing In Horses; it’s a blue ribbon win for me.

Free Jumping – with Video!

American Quarter Horse Billy free jumping for the first time

Billy free jumping. For videos, see links in post.

My husband, Jaime Navarro, and I won a silent auction item at the recent Maryland Horse Council annual barbeque: 1 Free Jumping Session with Steuart Pittman. At Pittman’s Dodon Farm, he and an assistant school a horse through their jumping chute in the indoor arena. According to the auction flyer, “Most horses only need to do it once or twice for them and you to find out just how much talent they have.”

A life-long horseman, Steuart Pittman’s credentials include certification to teach eventing through the preliminary level. I featured him in Believing In Horses as “the current President of the MHC, a well-known local equestrian, and a former grassroots lobbyist,” all true. Dodon Farm’s business ranges from breeding, training, and starting horses to improving riders. I also consider Steuart a “horse saver” (my term), for his tremendous efforts in supporting the MHC’s Unwanted Horse Project and in his work retraining off-track Thoroughbreds. He and his wife, Erin, created The Retired Racehorse Training Project, which recently received its official 501(c)3 charitable status.

My husband really enjoys silent auctions — following the bids, the last minute scramble before the pens go down, and the wins. When they announced he won the Free Jump session, he turned to me and said, “I can’t wait to see what Billy can do.” Billy is Jaime’s Quarter Horse, a former racehorse, who masquerades as a Thoroughbred.

“Billy?” I thought to myself. “Well, okay. That’s not exactly what I had in mind, but it will work.”

I guess we’ve known each other long enough for him to read my expression, and he continued, “Or Lucky – maybe we should take Lucky instead.”

And so we ended up bringing both Billy and Lucky, after discussing it with Steuart.

Upon arrival, Steuart brought us into the indoor arena, one horse at a time, and explained the set up. He, and his assistant, Emily, would be free longeing the horse around a circle, having him run through the chute. It would start with a trot, no poles, then progress to a cross rail, then a series of jumps.

Our role was to stay in the middle and watch, and not distract the horse by talking to him, coaxing, clucking, etc. Do you have any idea how hard that is to do? Non-horse people, that’s like asking you to go to your kids’ soccer game and watch from the sidelines and not say a thing! You can grade us from the videos as to whether we got a pass or fail on that one.
I posted a few video clips together, showing the progression. I’ll start with Billy.

We learned so much from this. We anticipated Billy would be a bit uncomfortable in the new setting, but the last thing we thought is that he wouldn’t want to canter. He loves to move – fast – so this surprised us. We also noted an unusual maneuver with his left hind during the flight of the jump and the landing. This is something we’re going to keep an eye on and see if it’s consistent, and also see if he does the same with his right hind when moving in the opposite direction. It’s nice to have an idea of what’s going on beneath you when in flight.

Lucky, Andalusian cross, free jumping

Color Me Lucky believes he likes to jump!


As Pittman said, “There are no two horses that jump alike.” The next clip, of Lucky (AKA Color Me Lucky) demonstrates this. At five-years-old, this was Lucky’s first attempt at anything above two feet; he seemed to like it.

Overall, the Free Jump Session showed us what our horses can do, as Pittman says, “without the rider in the way.” A completely enjoyable experience, run by true professionals, I highly recommend it. For a complete paper on the issue, see Pittman’s Teaching Horses How to Jump. And for more information on Dodon Farm, in Davidsonville, Md., please see www.DodonFarm.com. Of course, comments are always appreciated here, too!

A Portion of the Proceeds to Help Thoroughbreds

Thoroughbred Placement and Rescue, Inc. Booth at Maryland Million

Lucy Krone (left), on the Board of Directors for Thoroughbred Placement and Rescue, Inc., received check from Valerie Ormond (right) as a portion of the proceeds from Beliveing In Horses.

The highlight of my weekend came on Saturday when I provided one of the Maryland rescues featured in Believing In Horses with a small donation. When I decided to write a book about unwanted horses, I knew I wanted to include real life rescues and retraining facilities. I’d met Kimberly Clark, owner and founder of Thoroughbred Placement and Rescue, Inc. (TPR, Inc.) once, and knew she was the type person, and ran the kind of facility, I wanted to accurately portray in the story. Besides bringing awareness to the unwanted horse problem, I had also hoped to recognize the efforts of hard-working volunteers and provide a portion of the book proceeds to two Maryland horse rescue organizations (Freedom Hill Horse Rescue is the other, and they’ll be receiving a check during their Oct. 22nd fundraiser).

When I found out that TPR, Inc. would have a booth at the Maryland Million horse race, I thought it would be a great opportunity to present them a check on that day. I hadn’t expected to be able to provide a donation this soon, since the book has only been out for a few months, but people have been so generous. It’s funny, the book sells for $12.67 with Maryland tax, and at one point I started saying, ‘Or $13.00 even if you want me to donate that extra 33 cents directly to the rescues.’ It’s amazing how many people want to donate that change, and how some have even tacked on a few extra dollars.

J.K. on a former racehorse at Laurel Park, Md.

Jockey J.K. Adams, featured in Believing In Horses, takes part in the Thoroughbred demonstration between races at the Maryland Million, Laurel Park, Md.


According to TPR, Inc.’s mission statement: “Thoroughbred Placement and Rescue, Inc. exists to improve the lives of thoroughbred racehorses by finding the best homes possible for them upon retirement from racing. They successfully transition and retrain racehorses for other disciplines and use these techniques and philosophies to help others learn these skills. They strive to improve the reputation of the Thoroughbred by providing the correct information about this wonderful breed of horse. Through placement, support, education and rescue, they strive to make a difference.

Although my monetary donation from Believing In Horses is small, I know it is for a big cause. I hope that the more people learn about horses, the many wonderful horse people we have here in Maryland, and how people can make a difference and continue our state’s historic horse legacy.

Thank you Kimberly Clark and all the other horse savers for all that you do!

For more information on Thoroughbred placement and Rescue, Inc., please visit www.goodhorse.org. And for more information about the book Believing In Horses, please visit www.BelievingInHorses.com. Please click on the link below to see a VIDEO of the Thoroughbred demonstration during the Maryland Million at Laurel Park, Md., Oct. 1, 2011.

TPR, Inc. at Maryland Milliion