Riding Invisible – Book Review

Riding Invisible
It’s been awhile since a book review, and since I found this particular book so interesting, I wanted to share “Riding Invisible” by Sandra Alonzo with you.

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I loved “Riding Invisible” and had a hard time putting it down. The story begins with young Yancy running away from home on his horse, Shy, and the journal of his adventure. Yancy also happens to be an illustrator, and his illustrations help put the reader in the mind of an adolescent boy. While the subject matter is serious – abusive brother, parents trying to cope with the brother’s mental illness, homelessness, and more – the book is not morose or depressing. The author clearly writes from the boy’s point of view, seeing all these issues as he sees them.

I would say “Riding Invisible” is appropriate for ages 13 and up due to some of the language and situations. But as an adult, I truly appreciated the child’s perspective, and it made me think about fairness in families when one child’s behavior creates chaos. Perhaps I cared about Yancy so much becasue the character was so well developed. Spoiler alert: in the end it seemed there was hope.

I highly recommend this book. It is a very different read, and one that will leave readers of all ages thinking beyond the pages.

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Making A Difference, One Horse, Or Human, at a Time

Hello readers, I was a finalist in Angelea Walkup’s HorseGirlTV Guest Bloggers competition!  Please see the guest post at http://www.horsegirltv.com/making-a-difference-one-horse-or-human-at-a-time/.  Thanks, Angelea, and Team HorseGirlTV for inviting me to stop by.

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I last posted about “Keeping It Real” in writing and mentioned how some people responded to my book, Believing In Horses, turning fiction into reality. Last week, some local children made a significant donation to local rescues in their “Kids Can Do BIG Things, Too!” campaign. Please welcome my guest blogger, Kristy Alvarez, founder of Desire Ministries and the leader of this campaign, who tells the story in her words. 

As many of you know, or may not know, through Desire Ministries, we have been running an after-school Horse Club program since 2006.  We meet with the students of Cornerstone Christian Academy on a weekly basis so that the students who participate can learn the basics of horseback riding and horsemanship at Loftmar Stables in Bowie, Md.

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Keeping It Real at the Annapolis Book Festival

This year, the Annapolis Book Festival included a panel, “Young Adult Books: Keeping It Real.” The title alone fascinated me, and I was thrilled to be part of it. The Key School in Annapolis created the Annapolis Book Festival 10 years ago when a group of dedicated parents decided to bring a world class event promoting reading and writing to Annapolis, Md. Once involved with the event, I quickly recognized why the Annapolis Book Festival holds the reputation as one of the finest book festivals in the region. With over 40 authors and 25 panels, The Key School saw to every detail and ensured both authors and audiences enjoyed the event.

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Kings of Colorado – Book Review

Kings of Colorado by David E. Hilton

Not long ago, I received an e-mail that went something like this:

“Dear Valerie,
David E. Hilton’s debut novel KINGS OF COLORADO—now available in paperback (Simon & Schuster; January 3, 2012; $14.00)—is a powerful coming-of-age story set on a juvenile delinquent ranch in the Rockies….I would love to send you a copy of KINGS OF COLORADO to review, giveaway, or feature on Believing in Horses….” 

Since Simon & Schuster cared about my thoughts, I thought I would share them here as well.

In Kings of Colorado (Simon and Schuster, 2011) by David E. Hilton, Will Sheppard stabs, but does not kill, his father, and pays the price for the rest of his life. Sent to the Swope Ranch Boys’ Reformatory in Colorado across the country from his Chicago home, thirteen-year-old Will learns lessons one would hope a child protecting his mother from his abusive father would never have to learn. Two years at the brutal boys’ ranch toughens Will, but does not leave him devoid of emotions. His saving graces include friendships, a special horse he trains, and a kind nurse. Will endures one violent and tragic hardship after another, leaving the reader wondering if he can possibly survive.

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Judging a Writing Competition

Children's Writing Competition Poster I just participated as a judge in the first annual Voice For The Horse Children’s Writing Competition, on the topic of “Wild Horses.”  The founder of Voice For The Horse, Yvonne Allen, created the competition to provide an educational opportunity and to allow children to share their love for horses through their written words.  I agreed to be a judge several reasons, but primarily because I felt a need to “give back,” and to encourage our next generation of writers.  Each entry inspired me — each a unique voice.  The children demonstrated dedication, passion, and a willingness to take a chance.  I loved their spirit.

I hoped the competition would demonstrate to children that yes, they have a voice, and that people listen to what they have to say, especially when expending time and effort articulating their thoughts in a meaningful way.  This was the first competition I had seen in the equine field encouraging children to express their views in writing following an educational phase. The organization’s mandate includes educating people about horses and their needs, promoting North American horse heritage, and looking to the future through the voices of our children.

In order to help educate youth on many aspects of “Wild Horses,” entrants reviewed materials provided as part of the competition, including videos and documents.   The materials and rules differed slightly for the 12 and under age group, and for the 13 – 18 group, ensuring both were age appropriate.  Voice For The Horse also encouraged writers to conduct research on their own, and of course, express their own final views.

In trying to stay with the theme of my blog, I’d like to provide some personal “lessons learned” for others who may be judging writing competitions:

  1.  Judging is hard.  If you haven’t done it, try it.  It’s great experience.  Fortunately, this wasn’t my first.  But I still find it hard.
  2.  Ensure you judge each entry against the same criteria.  This is particularly important when judging very unlike stories.  Following is an example of some potential judging criteria for a competition including both an educational and writing phase:  Comprehension, Organization, Conclusions, Creativity, and Writing.
  3. Carefully consider the rules.  A brilliant story that didn’t follow guidelines may be brilliant, but shouldn’t stack up fairly against those that did.
  4.  Remember the writer is human.  Emphasize some positive points if providing a written critique.
  5. Don’t judge the story you wish was written; judge the story written.

I have the opportunity to talk to many young folks, and so many express an interest in writing.  I always encourage them to do so, and to start now.  This competition provided an excellent, and free, means for youth to become actively involved in the horse industry and practice their communication skills.  Fortunately, Voice For The Horse and its board of directors decided to continue the Children’s Writing Competition program as part of its baseline activities, with the next six writing competitions planned for the future.  Stay tuned!

If anyone has thoughts on judging, please share.  These seems to be a lot out there on entering contests and competitions, but not so much on first-hand experiences with the judging.  Did I mention that it’s hard?